Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Anti-Fascist Council for the National Liberation of Yugoslavia

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No consensus to promote at this time - Hog Farm (talk) via MilHistBot (talk) 17:20, 26 February 2022 (UTC) « Return to A-Class review list[reply]

Anti-Fascist Council for the National Liberation of Yugoslavia edit

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Nominator(s): Tomobe03 (talk)

Anti-Fascist Council for the National Liberation of Yugoslavia (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I am nominating this article for A-Class review because I believe it is close to complying with A-class criteria and would like to receive feedback allowing further improvements to the article. Thanks Tomobe03 (talk) 12:46, 14 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support I reviewed this at GA and am satisfied it meets A-class standards. -Indy beetle (talk) 06:45, 12 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Drive-by from CPA edit

  • There are some MOS:SANDWICH issues in the First session section. Please remove this issues. Cherers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:14, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Buidhe edit

I did a general copyedit of the article. Hopefully I have not accidentally introduced any Americanisms.

  • "It lost three Croatian Peasant Party (HSS) ministers including the party's leader and the deputy prime minister Vladko Maček, who resigned and stayed in the country. The HSS thus split and lost influence." Does the who clause apply just to Macek or all three? Also, why is the HSS split relevant to the Avnoj? If the point of these sentences is to highlight the narrow basis and weak legitimacy of the exile government, it's enough just to say that the 3 HSS and 1 Muslim minister resigned.
  • "In combination with fear of communism, this led him to ignore information about Chetnik collaboration with the Axis powers, and appoint their leader Draža Mihailović the Minister of the Army, Navy and Air Forces." This sentence needs to be rewritten as I'm not clear what it's trying to say.

(t · c) buidhe 10:06, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Vami edit

Reserving a spot. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 11:16, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Coordinator comment edit

With Tomobe having gone inactive for six weeks, this is being closed until they become active again - There is no prejudice against re-nomination and any editor may renominate this one at any time. Hog Farm Talk 17:14, 26 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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