Wikipedia:WikiProject Highways/Peer review/Utah State Route 68

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Utah State Route 68 edit

I am thinking about nominating this for GA, but want to see if there is anything that could be touched up on it before it goes to GA. --Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) 05:09, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Still fairly new to the project, so I'm not too keen on what separates a GA from a B, but some photos would be good. Also, Redwood Road doesn't pass through the western edge of Salt Lake City - it's only a mile or two west of the central downtown area. The city limits extend nearly out to Magna, some 8-ish miles west of Redwood Road. —Preceding unsigned comment added by DeFaultRyan (talk • contribs) 15:50, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

True, although the area Redwood Road passes through is definitely considered the west side - C L — 19:16, 7 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, so SR-68 is up for peer review eh? Only suggestion I have is integrating the paragraph in the RD about the lanes into the first paragraph. Yeah, I know I put it there, but I suppose it doesn't merit its own paragraph, or does it? Just a suggestion. Oh, and I also haz teh picters u requested, although they're only the stretch of route in Davis County. I'll upload them the next day - CL — 18:41, 7 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Okay, cool. I may be able to get some pictures, as I work off Redwood and I-215, but I am not sure. --Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) 19:44, 7 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

That's where I took pictures. I got some for I-215 from around 21st North to Redwood, and then Redwood from that exit north to the northern terminus of SR-68. C L — 19:59, 7 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Got the pictures - C L — 01:52, 9 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This sentence in the lead sounds choppy to me "linking US-6 to all of the metropolitan area's major freeways and expressways (SR-154, I-215, SR-201, I-80, and I-15, in respect of south to north) and to US-89." Maybe work on this a bit. I think just state all freeways and expressways, the other information is already in the infobox and major intersections???? Dave (talk) 23:27, 8 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You're right, I removed the stuff in the parentheses as it's already mentioned in the RD - C L — 01:52, 9 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA Ready? -- Do we think its good to go, if so I will nominate it. --Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) 16:54, 9 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I say go ahead. Once I-215 gets copyedited I'll nom that for GA too. C L — 17:30, 9 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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