Wikipedia:WikiProject Highways/Peer review/Pennsylvania Route 145

Pennsylvania Route 145 edit

This article has the potential for something great. Everything cited, well written, all I need is a map or/and a picture. -- JohnnyAlbert10 Time to talk · My Help 16:38, 15 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Citations need access dates and a consistent layout - use {{cite web}} and other citation templates to achieve this. PennDOT is the proper capitalization, not Penndot. "During night time, the beautiful city lights of Allentown are visible from PA 145" is POV. The "Allentown" section needs references. "Communities along the route" is redundant to the route description. Article is of good length, but these things need to be addressed. —Scott5114 04:32, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • I understand everything except the your last statement "Communities along the route is redundant to the route description". What does that mean? -- JohnnyAlbert10 Time to talk · My Help 12:53, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • The communities are already mentioned (or should already be mentioned) in the route desciption; thus, there is no reason to give them their own section. —Scott5114 18:55, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]