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Thomas Pynchon edit

It's not a particularly great article, but it has been improving incrementally for some while—getting better organized, more fully referenced, etc. The talk page tells a history of obscure quarrels and opaque debates (which, if you're familiar with Pynchon himself, may seem oddly fitting). Right now, I'd just like to attract a few fresh brains and see if a new perspective or two could be helpful.

Be seeing you. Anville 21:12, 14 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I would suggest improving and increasing the size of the lead, given the size of the article. AndyZ 23:02, 23 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Good point. I'll get to it, in my copious free time. (-; Anville 20:23, 24 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]