Wikipedia:WikiProject Aviation/Peer review/FedEx Express

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FedEx Express

Major changes have been made to this article since it was rated as a Start Class. Spikydan1 (talk) 20:00, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Born2flie

This peer review evaluated this version of the article.

Peer review (see here for criteria)

1. Prose

   a. well written: b. comprehensive: c. factually accurate: d. summary style:

   • lead section paragraphs are small, consider combining (WP:LEAD)
   • wording of largest airline fleet and tonnage in lead section is difficult
   • shifts between verb tenses throughout article
   • single line, single sentence paragraphs throughout article
   • punctuation problems

2. References

   a. use of inline citations: b. reliable sources: c. No original research:

3. Style

   a. lead section: b. appropriate structure: c. conforms to WP:MOS:

   • left aligned images separate subheading from text (MOS:IMAGES)
   • formatting of citations not according to MOS, use {{cite}} template, include title and url and accessed date.

4. Controversy

   a. neutral point of view: b. stable, with no edit wars:

5. Graphics

   a. quality: b. image licenses:

   • FedExFeeder image is poor quality and slightly blurry. It is a low resolution image, so the thumb doesn't hide the problems.

6. Quality:

   Article classification:

   C-Class. Still needs some work, but hopefully, this will give a better idea than just the B-Class checklist. --Born2flie (talk) 22:21, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

• Have edited to (hopefully) improve the quality of prose, and remove most of the grammatical & punctuation errors. Structure may still need attention. --JCG33 (talk) 23:10, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

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