Wikipedia:WikiProject Aviation/Peer review/2013 Eberswalde-Finow Zlin crash

2013 Eberswalde-Finow Zlin crash edit

I've listed this article for peer review as it was reworked and moved into the current aviation accident template.

Thanks,

Baerentp (talk) 13:59, 16 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Review comments edit

I am reviewing this article and trying to make edits to the best of my ability. I will post comments that I am unable to address myself here as I work.

I am not sure I understand how the purchase contract relates to not having a valid registration. Could this be clarified? "The investigation revealed that on the day of the crash, the aircraft did not have a valid registration: the purchase contract required the aircraft to be promptly deleted from the Czech register."
Not sure what "Pilot in Command (PIC) for Single Engine Piston land (SEP land)" means; I may simply be unfamiliar with the terminology but it feels like maybe a word might be missing somewhere.

Bramble claw x 02:55, 17 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]