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Checked reviews edit

(Declined) Draft:Anna Jones (chef)
Pass - You may want to specify that this failed due to the number of unreliable sources because there are a lot of reliable ones in the article that do establish notability. Hewhoamareismyself
(Declined) Draft:David Runnion-Bareford
Fail - Again use that comment to explain the decline a bit better, new editors aren't going to see the problem. Declining for inline citations probably would have been more helpful for moving this along. Hewhoamareismyself
A bit harsh, there was no claim of notability in the article. The pre-written decline message should suffice. Sionk (talk) 18:59, 8 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
• One wonders why Hewhoamareismyself (talk · contribs) did not add a comment himself if he thought one was needed (I have now done so). --ThaddeusB (talk) 16:33, 11 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
(Declined) Draft:Sarin & Co.
Pass - Timtrent
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Pass - Timtrent
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Pass - Timtrent
(Declined) Draft:James Hay Partnership
Fail - Declined as unchanged since last review, but some changes had been made that cleared up the promotional language (in fairness last review was blantantly wrong in declining it for NN - 2 reviews ago properly noticed promotional language was only problem ThaddeusB
The five previous declines were for notability and the author had done nothing to address these concerns. Sionk (talk) 15:31, 11 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
• Actually, they had. Refs were added here, here, & here which is why davidwr commented "I don't think notability is an issue but this has too much of a promotional tone for my taste." You are correct that Drumlineramos then declined it after David's comment with the same NN reasoning; however, (as I noted) this decline was clearly incorrect - it should have been declined for promotional tone, as per davidwr, or accepted and cleaned up. Subsequently, tone was addressed here and inappropriate external links were removed here. Just because the review was declined 5 times, doesn't mean it didn't deserve a proper review. Indeed, it was in far better shape than most articles we accept at AfC. The company is quite clearly notable [1] and near as I can tell the only reason people kept asserting it was because of past reviews predujuicing the next review. --ThaddeusB (talk) 16:19, 11 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
(Declined) Draft:Live City
Pass - A key problem though is that the submitter needs to understand what sources are reliable, and adding more and more self-published sources won't help Ritchie333