Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 June 25

Hello, I need help with 2 things: (1) I'd like to create sections with bold headers (Personal Life, Controversy, etc.) and I can't figure out how to do that. (2) I'm having trouble formatting my references. Can anyone help?? Thank you!

Kmacarthur (talk) 00:53, 25 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

For headers, simply use == text ==. References may be slightly more difficult, see WP:REFBEGIN. -Cntras (talk) 11:26, 25 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Recently, I made an article abot Konami's game Reflec Beat. I would like a review about it. Any constructive critics and advice will be accepted. Thank you. TheSirius17 (talk) 06:03, 25 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Was wondering if anyone could help with the grammar in this article, as well as the organization. All information is valid. Quinnmanolis (talk) 07:08, 25 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Be that as it may, the article wouldn't last an hour in mainspace because 1) There are no inline references or citations listed, and 2) You are not notable enough. Writing about oneself is frowned upon here (see this section on WP's conflict of interest guidelines). I could not find any coverage of you outside of your high school football career, and that is really "local" coverage so you would not pass WP:ATH. I apologize in advance if I sound harsh, it's not meant that way, but merely to convey the facts as they are.   ArcAngel   (talk) ) 13:42, 25 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]


[[1]] request assistance in editing the infobox, image and submission. tks {Szolan (talk) 09:01, 25 June 2011 (UTC)}

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request assistance in formatting infobox, image of the article and submission. tks {Szolan (talk) 09:01, 25 June 2011 (UTC)}[reply]


Szolan (talk) 09:01, 25 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Touring Exhibitions Group A new article has been posted on this subject. Please review and comment.

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86.5.51.212 (talk) 16:14, 25 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Pastor Taiwo Odubiyi Article on a Nigerian Pastor, author & counsellor

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I would really appreciate it if someone can tell my why the article isn't showing up in search engines and what i can do to correct that (if & where i should place tags)

Lapatronne (talk) 23:34, 25 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, your article currently fails to establish notability. Please do not use facebook as a reference, it is unreliable. Use reliable sources like newspapers, books, magazines, TV, etc. and not facebook or any other user-edited sites (like blogs, youtube, etc.) You must fix this as soon as possible or your article can be deleted. Thank you.-- ObsidinSoul 03:51, 28 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]