Wikipedia:Portal peer review/Ice hockey/archive1

Portal:Ice hockey edit

I've never nominated a portal to be featured, and I've decide to pay attention to this portal, working on in on and off since August, but restructured it again earlier this month. I'd appreciate some comments on hockey to improve this portal. Maxim_(talk) 21:17, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Chris.B

It is looking good to me. A few suggestions —
- Shorten the introduction somewhat. It's a little overwhelming at the moment.
  - Done.
- Consider using {{cquote}} for the quotes. It has convenient parameters for citation.
  - Done.
- Headlines in the news section should be linked to the news story and mention the date. kinda Done, Wikinews Importer Bot set up.
- You need archives for the news section and it needs to be updated more frequently. You may wish to use the Wikinews Importer Bot for the latter. tentatively Done, see above. However, I think archives is pushing it, why do we need archives of stuff that happened a year ago? Maxim_(talk) 13:45, 2 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- It is unclear how the selections are going to be updated. If there are enogh materials to rotate through each section, please establish random rotation.
  - Right now, it's going to update every month, but when there is enough material, I will add random rotation.
    - Random rotation for DYK now exists, at present four items, but will expand when the news section is up to par. Maxim_(talk) 01:52, 2 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise it's very nice, good work. Chris.B 21:47, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

There are some suggestions here. Maxim_(talk) 15:26, 24 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment by Rjd0060

I didn't think it was too bad, but I guess every little thing helps. Good work, Maxim. - Rjd0060 (talk) 20:16, 24 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]