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Tone (MOS:NOTE
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Keep the tone impartial and instructional. Avoid phrases that "break the fourth wall" or insert the editor's personal judgment.
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Avoid rhetorical questions, "note that", "obviously", "awesome", "unbelievable", etc.
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Tense (MOS:TENSE)
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Write articles in the present tense. Avoid past tense except for past events, subjects that are dead or no longer meaningfully exist, or periodicals and similar written material that are no longer being produced.
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- Barack Obama is a former president of the United States.
- The Beatles were an English rock band that formed in Liverpool in 1960.
- Earth: Final Conflict is a Canadian science fiction television series that ran for five seasons between October 6, 1997, and May 20, 2002.
- Dún Aonghasa is the ruin of a prehistoric Irish cliff fort. Its original shape was presumably oval or D-shaped, but parts of the cliff and fort have since collapsed into the sea.
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Gender (MOS:GNL; MOS:GID)
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Make generic references gender-neutral. This does not apply to situations where gender-neutral language will confuse the reader.
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- In basketball, players start by taking their positions.
- A pilot must keep the (vs 'his') spacepod under control at all times.
- The pregnant woman refused to be examined by a male nurse, but accepted help from a female nurse.
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For specific references, use pronouns that reflect the subject's most recent ID.
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Elliot Page is a Canadian actor and producer. He has received various accolades.
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Group/cultural identity (MOS:ID)
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Be specific and avoid vague, stereotyping ID
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Where there is a discrepancy between a group's preferred term and a reliable source, use what is most commonly used by reliable sources when this is clear. Use the preferred term when this is unclear.
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Words to watch (MOS:WTW)
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Use sources and factual statements to demonstrate a subject's importance. There is no need to rely on value-laden words (see below).
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- Acceptable: Bob Dylan was included in Time 100: The Most Important People of the Century, in which he was called "master poet, caustic social critic and intrepid, guiding spirit of the counterculture generation".[1] By the mid-1970s, his songs had been covered by hundreds of other artists.[2]
- Unacceptable: Bob Dylan is the defining figure of the 1960s counterculture and a brilliant songwriter.
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Avoid "peacock terms", or positively loaded words that promote the subject of an article. Use sources and factual statements to demonstrate a subject's importance.
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iconic, visionary, innovative, revolutionary, virtuoso
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Avoid negatively loaded labels unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject. In the latter case, attribute the use of the label and establish context for any formal use of the term.
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cult, fundamentalist, heretic, neo-Nazi, -gate, pseudo-
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Avoid weasel words which vaguely dress a statement with authority, without basis. Some such statements may be acceptable in the lead section of an article (which summarises content in the body of the article) when they accurately represent the overall opinions of reliable sources.
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some people say, many scholars state, it is considered, experts declare, it is widely thought, scientists claim
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Avoid persuasive writing. The editor should not impose an interpretation of a story.
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actually, indeed, tragically, arguably, interestingly, it should be noted
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Repetition is not a problem. Avoid distorting meaning with synonyms in an attempt to avoid repeating words.
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- Clear and preferred: said, stated, described, wrote, commented, according to
- Synonyms to watch: reveal, point out, expose, explain, insist, confess, surmise
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