Wikipedia:Featured article review/Phonograph cylinder/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 09:38, 7 December 2007.

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Phonograph cylinder

Review commentary

Notified User:Infrogmation,

I am new to this process, but this is one of the weaker FA I've seen. There are almost no inline citations and the images, while old still may not be out of copyright. It may have been great at an earlier time, but it needs review of it's status.--Reflex Reaction (talk)• 15:13, 30 October 2007 (UTC)

• Comment: For now I'll only comment on the images. All but one of the images in the article were scanned from original pre-1923 US published material in my own collection, certainly legitimately PD-US. (The remaining image is a GFDL licenced photo uploaded by another user.) -- Infrogmation 15:59, 30 October 2007 (UTC)

FARC commentary

Suggested FA criteria concerns are citations (1c) and images (3). Marskell (talk) 13:28, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

• Remove—Fascinating topic, good images, but very ordinary writing. Swallow this one: "The phonograph was conceived by Thomas Edison on 18 July 1877 for recording telephone messages, his first test using waxed paper." Then: recordings were "done". Comma fairy needed urgently. References (Oh my lord)? Choppy. Tony (talk) 05:08, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
• Remove per nom. --Peter Andersen 20:47, 2 December 2007 (UTC)

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