Wikipedia:Featured article review/George Brown, Baron George-Brown/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed by User:Marskell 09:57, 30 September 2008 [1].

George Brown, Baron George-Brown edit

Review commentary edit

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No inline citations, lead is very short, and a lot of peacock terms flying about. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 00:48, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

FARC commentary edit

Suggested FA criteria concerns are referencing (1c), LEAD (2a), and prose (1a). Marskell (talk) 12:20, 17 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Remove, certainly not a featured article in its current state. Wizardman 18:54, 22 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Remove 1c. YellowMonkey (bananabucket) 08:28, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Remove. Agree with everything said about by Marskell (talk · contribs), Wizardman (talk · contribs), and YellowMonkey (talk · contribs). Cirt (talk) 10:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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