Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/MMORPG/archive1

MMORPG

I do think this article do deserve to be featured, it is well in length and depth. It's well written and very comprehensive, after all it has been cited as a resource by BBC, even though it might still lacks some pictures. --Yamamoto Ichiro 00:17, 15 November 2005 (UTC)

• Object. Too long, should be split up. Needs a more comprehensive lead section (merge "overview" section?). Doesn't follow Wikipedia's stylistic conventions (e.g., uses second person pronouns). Prose isn't brilliant; lots of list-like sections of single-sentence paragraphs. Fredrik | talk 00:26, 15 November 2005 (UTC)
• Object. Lead needs expantion, external links should be moved out of main body to references and linked via Wikipedia:Footnotes, more pictures and references would be useful. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus ^Talk 13:03, 15 November 2005 (UTC)
• Object:
  1. The image Image:WoWScrnShot 090404 231112.jpg seems to be used for decorative purposes only. This does not qualify under Wikipedia:Fair use, so the image should be removed.
  2. The image Image:Runescape222.jpg is tagged as "fair use", but does not have a fair-use rationale. See Wikipedia:Fair use and Wikipedia:Image description page#Fair use rationale for what's needed.

  --Carnildo 22:02, 15 November 2005 (UTC)