Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Hawaii/archive1
Hawaii edit
Highly detailed article with mmuch reference and factuality. Dbertman 16:06, 21 June 2006 (UTC)
- Object. Lead is too short, see WP:LEAD. Lack of footnotes and proper referencing, see WP:FOOTNOTE and Wikipedia:Template messages/Sources of articles/Generic citations for help with citations. Lists need converting to prose, and some subsections are too small and should be expanded or merged into other sections. — Wackymacs 16:15, 21 June 2006 (UTC)
- Object - only one reference and no inline citations. Pagrashtak 16:16, 21 June 2006 (UTC)