Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Fishing/archive1

Fishing edit

Fishing is one of the most interesting pasttimes people practice. The article on fishing is also well-designed, and well-cited. --GoOdCoNtEnT 03:15, 6 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Object. Insufficient lead, too many lists, contains too many one sentence paragraphs, and lacks inline citations. RyanG e rbil10 (Drop on in!) 04:32, 6 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object.. While the article does have inline citations, it does not have enough of them. A lot more statements within the article should be sourced. -- Underneath-it-All 15:31, 6 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Object As per above. Many many other problems as well. A few examples -- hunter-gather is wrong. And every sentence in the Food section is a paragraph by itself.--ppm 17:35, 7 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
It is a really good article, but I suggest that you resolve the merge suggestion and either find a more direct (possibly primary) reference for the point supported by Guns, Germs and Steel, or at least add a page number. Object. - Samsara (talk • contribs) 17:32, 12 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]