Looks okay, but I'd like a second opinion before removing the cleanup tag. Copy editors?
Zack Green 21:42, 11 October 2005 (UTC)
Added to User:RedWordSmith/Desk Zack Green 21:42, 11 October 2005 (UTC)
- It's in pretty good shape, just needs a bit of polishing. - RedWordSmith 01:16, 12 October 2005 (UTC)
- Text seems fine now. Someone has placed a request for pictures on the talk page, so I'm passing this to User:Hunterd rather than closing it. - RedWordSmith 04:43, 18 October 2005 (UTC)
- It has a picture on it now. Does anyone think a diagram would help improve the text or has that been improved enough that it isn't needed? RJFJR 01:29, 22 October 2005 (UTC)
- I think it needs better formatting; I'll get onto this ASAP, however I am currently studying for my end-year exams. I'll get onto it perhaps tomorrow. I've never actually heard of a Paintball Marker before, so it'll be a good read! :-) Thanks ZPMMaker 07:27, 24 October 2005 (UTC)
- (I think it's the politically correct term for a paintball gun) RJFJR 19:41, 25 October 2005 (UTC)
- Is this ready to close? There seems to be a lot of detail bordering on trivia, but maybe it's importatn and interresting information. RJFJR 00:37, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
- I fixed three typos, but I didn't see anything else too wrong about it. I think it's ready to close. - Pureblade | Θ 01:37, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
- Good enough for me. Closing. RJFJR 05:52, 30 January 2006 (UTC)