Looks like it needs copyediting for layout (wfy) and tone.
user:AC Boy seems to be working on it. 20:29, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
Several people have taken this article in hand and it is now much improved, though it is uncertain how much credit the taskforce can claim. Closing project. RJFJR 17:07, 16 November 2006 (UTC)