Wikipedia:Article assessment/Extinct mammals/Portuguese Ibex

Assessment Article assessment
Extinct mammals
Assessment completed
27 February 2006
5 March 2006
Assessments
Aurochs

Australopithecus
Caribbean Monk Seal
Caspian Tiger
Mammoth
Myotragus balearicus
Neanderthal
Portuguese Ibex
Pyrenean Ibex
Quagga
Thylacine

Assessment of an article under the topic Extinct mammals.


Article: Portuguese Ibex

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Review by violet/riga

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  • Coverage and factuality: 5
Doesn't talk about its place in the food chain or go into much detail about the animal; a good list of sources but not inline citations
  • Writing style: 4
Some badly fragmented sentences ("Grey wolves and golden eagles could be another reason why the population declined so fast...") and general poor prose
  • Structure: 6
The structure is good for the content that exists
  • Aesthetics: 3
A good, standard taxobox but no images
  • Overall: 5

It details the extinction, but gives little information about anything else. violet/riga (t) 19:48, 27 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Review by Danaman5

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  • Coverage and factuality: 4
Having so little information on the animal itself is unacceptable. The extinction info is good.
  • Writing style: 6
Some poor sentences, as said above. The prose is acceptable in some areas.
  • Structure: 5
Good for content that exists, but maybe a subdivision for the extinction section.
  • Aesthetics: 3
As above, good taxobox, no images of any kind. Unacceptable.
  • Overall: 5

Needs definite work; I will see what I can do. --Danaman5 06:40, 2 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]