Wikipedia:Article assessment/Extinct mammals/Portuguese Ibex
Assessment 
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| Extinct mammals |
| Assessment completed 27 February 2006 – 5 March 2006 |
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Assessment of an article under the topic Extinct mammals.
Article: Portuguese Ibex
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Review by violet/riga
edit- Coverage and factuality: 5
- Doesn't talk about its place in the food chain or go into much detail about the animal; a good list of sources but not inline citations
- Writing style: 4
- Some badly fragmented sentences ("Grey wolves and golden eagles could be another reason why the population declined so fast...") and general poor prose
- Structure: 6
- The structure is good for the content that exists
- Aesthetics: 3
- A good, standard taxobox but no images
- Overall: 5
It details the extinction, but gives little information about anything else. violet/riga (t) 19:48, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
Review by Danaman5
edit- Coverage and factuality: 4
- Having so little information on the animal itself is unacceptable. The extinction info is good.
- Writing style: 6
- Some poor sentences, as said above. The prose is acceptable in some areas.
- Structure: 5
- Good for content that exists, but maybe a subdivision for the extinction section.
- Aesthetics: 3
- As above, good taxobox, no images of any kind. Unacceptable.
- Overall: 5
Needs definite work; I will see what I can do. --Danaman5 06:40, 2 March 2006 (UTC)