User talk:ZoyaBoris/New Sandbox

Feedback

Hi ZoyaBoris nice work so far. Here's some feedback for you.

• Wikipedia has some formatting policies so that articles "look" the same. One of those policies is that the reference should directly follow punctuation. Therefore, you should remove the space after the punctuation and before the reference (though keep the space after the reference). It should look like Sentence.[reference][space]Sentence.
• You did a great job of citing all the content you added!
• The structure is a bit confusing. You alternate between calling it TESA and TWSA throughout most of the article, but halfway through you state that it became TESA in 1916. In my opinion, you should consistently refer to it as TWSA up until the point where you acknowledge the name change, at which point it should be TESA thereafter.
• When you copied and pasted material into your sandbox, you were not in "edit mode" in the article you were copying. This means that the references all broke. I've gone ahead and fixed them for you, but it's good practice to make sure you're in edit mode in the future.
• I'm concerned that you're citing an unpublished dissertation. Wikipedia says that articles must be cited with reliable sources, and that those sources must be published. If this dissertation was truly never published, it does not meet the criteria to be considered a reliable source

Let me know if you have questions about any of this feedback! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 03:25, 25 July 2019 (UTC)

Elysia (Wiki Ed),

Thank you! I will make these revisions and not use the unpublished dissertation as a source. I'll continue editing the rest of the article. ZoyaBoris (talk) 03:32, 25 July 2019 (UTC)