User talk:Wikihusky07/sandbox

Good start on the degenerative subtopic! Could further explain why degenerative diseases are especially problematic (neurons don't regenerate). The distinction between each degenerative disease is helpful. --Imm19 (talk) 17:34, 18 November 2019 (UTC)

Joseph_Alsharif_Project3_PR

Added relevant content to elaborate on subsections that already existed in the original article. A new informative and important subsection, Degenerative, was added. The added and edited content is concise and can be understood by non-experts. Neutral tone. The included sources were reliable and all citation links worked for me. Colons need to be removed from subheadings to match Wikipedia formatting. The entire causes subsection from the original article was improved by elaboration (notable content addition that were presented in an unbiased manner) and inclusion of reliable sources that meet the Wikipedia requirements and guidelines. Overall great addition to Wikipedia and very good sources/references added, good job! --Rhea Joseph User:Wikihustle —Preceding undated comment added 19:05, 2 December 2019 (UTC)