User talk:WikiProjectforEnglish/Tunneling nanotube
I have to put in citations also WikiProjectforEnglish (talk) 15:31, 18 November 2019 (UTC)WikiProjectforEnglish I would like to continue adding molecules etc. to the Induction/Inhibition section, but am worried about the language being too redundant. Suggestions for how to expand this section, as well as what further information should be included in the history, mitochondrial transfer, and related structures sections would also be appreciated. WikiProjectforEnglish (talk) 19:28, 17 November 2019 (UTC)WikiProjectforEnglish
Sophie - Peer Review
editI thought the lay out/plan for this article is perfect! The information provided was clear and concise and is heading in a great direction. The only minor edit I would look out for is I am not sure if what the correct sentence structure is when referring to studies because a lot of the sentences start with "one group" or "one study". It might be better to refer to them by name so that it is easier to keep track of the studies. Overall, a great spectrum of information and it is all written in an accessible but knowledgable manner. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Skz67 (talk • contribs) 17:24, 18 November 2019 (UTC)