Valeriesophie

Welcome

Hello Valerie, welcome to the Wikipedia workshop on Be Bold. Greetz, Dick Bos (talk) 14:24, 6 November 2015 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia! Romaine (talk) 14:41, 6 November 2015 (UTC)

You can find the course page here: Wikipedia:Education program/Maastricht University/Autumn 2015. Romaine (talk) 14:41, 6 November 2015 (UTC)

Some remarks about your work in the sandbox on sharing accomodation

Hi Valerie. Please allow me to make some general remarks about what you have put in your sandbox until now:

• A very interesting attempt! Looks like this has good perspectives, from the Wiki-point of view.....
• In fact you do two (more or less) separated things:
  • about the history of the sharing economy - this is a good paragraph. To my humble opinion it is better than the existing paragraph in the Wikipedia article on sharing economy, so perhaps it can be integrated here.
  • about acco sharing: the introductory paragraph and the paragraphs on airbnb &c, on the critics, and with the overview. Perhaps this paragraphs can be taken together to form a new paragraph in the existing article on sharing economy.
• There still is something wrong with the references. See: Help:Referencing_for_beginners. (there are hundreds of help pages for all kinds of things on Wikipedia; the problem is to find your way in all these pages.....)

It is a pity that I can't be in your class next Friday. Good luck with the job! --Dick Bos (talk) 19:32, 24 November 2015 (UTC)