User talk:Tuh22823/Video game piracy

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Adrishaw

At this stage you can delete any sections you have not and do not plan to edit, and make sure you bold everything you do change or have changed. Also you should focus on adding content that cites peer-reviewed academic citations. You have a list started in the Bibliography you created previously so I would focus on finding was to incorporate that. You have identified three new sections to add, but that might be too much to do well in the time you have left. Also it's not clear if piracy culture is being defined here as unique to video game piracy (verses something that should go in online piracy). Also I would suggest that the picture you added doesn't really add much to the article (you were required to add one for week 8 to learn that system, but not required to have one in the final article).Adrishaw (talk) 17:30, 23 March 2021 (UTC)Reply