Peer/ Professor Suggestions:
Peer suggestions-
- Citation for first sentence of Daniel Miller's Wikipedia page.
This is a great suggestion, I just wouldn't know how the editor before me retrieved this sentence. How can I find that source?
- Add in Daniel Miller's major works into the career section.
I will look into more of his work and see what I can find!
- Be careful of repetition! Be clear!
I realized that my former edits of copyediting did not make much difference nor any sense. I decided to delete those sentences that I copyedited and I will be more aware to not be repetitive and do my best to use words that will make the content I'm adding in more clear.
- Add in why he was studying clothing (example of more content to add in)
That is a great example of how I can add in more context, I will admit that I was having trouble with this because there are so many options.
Professor suggestions -
- Expand on "The Internet: An Ethnographic Approach (like linking to his co-author's page, summarizing more of what the study was)
I will do more research with this text. I did look up the co- author (Don Slater) to make sure he had a Wikipedia page, thank you for this suggestion. I will expand on the research they conducted.
- Cite more specific material than what was in the single chapter.
In regards to specific material, does this mean to be short and clear about certain things Miller has done?
- Update publications list since it was last updated in 2017.
I will make sure to update the publications list.
- Add in publications that could be missing.
I will also add in publications, if necessary!
- Provide links to concepts addressed on page.
I will make sure to hyperlink any concepts talked about.
- See if there's media that would be useful to add.
I did realize that there was barely any images and such, I will be sure to do this.