User talk:TrogdorPolitiks/Sandbox

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Ahudson

This looks good so far; but I'd check controversial figures such as the number of deaths in the Nanking massacre with the existing main articles, and source them using refrences in those articles. Otherwise you're going to get a lot of trouble from some people. Ahudson 16:15, 16 January 2007 (UTC)Reply

I did. The death count that I used was one that was in the article already. Heavy Metal Cellisttalkcontribs

...don't forget to add pictures! Also, fewer section titles would be nice.Ahudson 18:26, 19 January 2007 (UTC)Reply

On second thought, fewer titles would be hard. try anyway though. Ahudson 18:26, 19 January 2007 (UTC)Reply