Trinityo12
The following comments relate to this course. Thanks for working on this Trintyo12. --Joe (talk) 13:50, 19 January 2014 (UTC)
Student article list edit
To read other students' draft articles click here.Then click each link for the article. --Joe (talk) 18:08, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
Created new section El Paso, Texas#Skate Parks
Colonias edit
Hi Trinity -
I noticed your edit to the page on colonias, and was wondering if you were intending to further edit the page as part of your course? I'm working with a class on environmental justice at UC Berkeley, and that series of pages is on the to-revamp list of a number of my students. (No worries at all if you intend to work on it further, I just figure it'll be easier to know ahead of time if another course is also working on it, so coordination can occur :)) Best, Kevin Gorman (talk) 08:39, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
- Hi Kevin Gorman,
- The colonias article was an option to work on for the course. Our course ends March 10 and the types of edits left for other students would be to improve the grammar, spelling, and citations of Colonias in New Mexico part of the article.
- These are the remaining assignments for the course:
- Feb. 18 Giving feedback to other students
- Feb. 21 Responding to feedback from other students
- Feb. 25 Feedback to other Wikipedia editors
- Feb. 28 Finishing touches to edits and articles
- March 4 Writing reflections about course
- March 7 Writing recommendations to improve the course
- If your course participants make edits to Colonias in New Mexico, I think that would add to this course's experience; it could be a reason for this course's participants to give feedback to one of your Wikipedia editors. Your kind message leads the way to what makes the Wikipedia community such a good one.
- I feel happy to hear about your course and look forward to watching this article develop.
- Best regards,
Skate Parks Feedback edit
How you included all of the skate parks in El Paso and its surroundings where really good. Providing links to each skate park was a helpful I clicked on it to see what the skate parks look like and it turns out I have actually been to one of them. Just the history of the skate parks that you provided for us to read were I would say outstanding. One thing I recommend is adding a little more references on all of the parks in El Paso.--BrantDaMerc (talk) 08:56, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
- Hello BrantDaMerc thank you for the recommendation on adding more references on all the parks in El Paso. It is something to consider in order to be able to see if any other sources have or provide different information that may be helpful for the page. Once again thank you for the recommendation.:--Trinityo12 (talk) 04:27, 22 February 2014 (UTC)
About you edition to Skate parks edit
You have done a great job in editing information to that section, my only suggestion is to add more information in the section about the locations, adding operation hours, what the limitation are, and what are the restrictions to the use of this public places. --Xaleman87 (talk) 03:10, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
- Hello Xaleman87 I really appreciate the feedback you left me. I believe that the recommendations are really something to consider especially how you mentioned the limitations and restrictions. All your recommendations are something that can sure enhance the information provided to the page. Thank you Xaleman87.:Trinityo12 (talk) 04:32, 22 February 2014 (UTC)