User talk:Travistheartwizard/Physician's Visit2
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Tyrandm
Peer Review
The article is arranged well with good headings and subheadings.
I feel a lot of the statements are too neutral and do not really describe the specific artwork.
It would be a good idea to review the sources and paraphrase and describe the actions and symbols in the painting, such as "Venus and Adonis" on the wall, eroticism, cupid sitting on the floor, etc., from the https://artuk.org/discover/artworks/the-physicians-visit-144397 source.
It doesn't appear that the Chapman book was referenced, where is Dixon sourced?
Paraphrase more specifically and explain "lovesickness", a good example is [[1]]