User talk:Tiffanyrodi/Anorexia nervosa

Review of work completed. Tiffany, I reviewed your article and provided feedback. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Arleenicolee (talk • contribs) 19:06, 17 June 2022 (UTC)

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Hi Tiffany! I like what you have proposed so far, I think it's interesting you're adding this to your article as I have not even learned about this. I did notice in your statement, I believe it was the third paragraph, where you said 'This is also a time when most older individuals experience a rise in conflict with family members, which increases the likelihood of an issue'. I think that taking out 'the likelihood of an issue' and adding something more specific like 'increases the likelihood of the development of depression or anxiety that causes anorexia'. You don't have to use that per say, but clarification would make that sentence make sense to me. Keep up the good work! Haleymck (talk) 00:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

Thank you Haleymck! I have edited the sentence that you mentioned so that there are more concrete examples of what conflicts can occur within a family that can lead to anorexia. I appreciate your feedback. Tiffanyrodi (talk) 00:30, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

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Hey Tiffany! I reviewed your work so far - great job! Ashleyphill (talk) 01:27, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

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Hey! I added your peer review! Savannaj13 (talk) 03:32, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

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Hi. I added another peer review — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eyannaib (talk • contribs) 03:59, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

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I thought it was great for you to include the rising trend of Anorexia nervosa. I also thought it was important that you included the populations the diagnosis is common in. It gives the reader more insight on the type of people who are more subjected to the condition. Overall, I think you made a solid contribution. You might can add some other dynamics that could play a role in causing Anorexia nervosa as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jeades18 (talk • contribs) 04:27, 19 June 2022 (UTC)