There is a ton of great information, context, and the related links are very helpful while reading this portion of the article. Most of the grammar is good- you repeat the phrase, "Women were barred from legal proceedings so the kyrios would do so on their behalf" 3 times though so make sure you edit the other 2 out. I think you have good examples of how some women were able to fight the norm in the case of owning property, divorce, and citizenship. However, one aspect you didn't talk about in this portion is education. I think you could talk about how women and education are related and the rights that went along with that. Also, women and war could be an interesting topic to research and add as well. Overall it looks good, just that one grammar section and maybe a few more topics you could discuss! - Maddy
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