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Latest comment: 7 years ago by TeleomerePeer

Peer Review

You only had one minor grammar mistake that I corrected, and your sentenced flowed nicely. I enjoyed reading it. Pji2013 (talk) 03:43, 7 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Grammar Only a couple of errors. In your 2nd sentence under function and regulation, you need a comma after "tissues" and before "including".In your 4th sentence you need a comma after "In addition". In your last sentence I think you meant to say "its function of chaperone can BE greatly AFFECTED. Other than that your section looks great! Rever004 (talk) 03:48, 7 November 2016 (UTC)Reply


"Peer Review overview" The HSP20 page has gotten the addition of an image, sourced from the Wikimedia commons, it had corrections and hyperlinks placed in the introduction section and a whole new section 'Function and Regulation' has been added and many sources used and cited! It was pleasure to contribute to a page that I have much personal interest in! I also thank all who have helped me with edits and grammar! [[User:TeleomerePeer|TeleomerePeer] (User talk:TeleomerePeer) 00:00, 22 November 2016 (UTC)Reply