User talk:T laq202/sandbox


To Do List

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  • explain how the class of 1913 were called pirates in the introduction
  • Can we have a better connection between group 2 and group 3's parts?
  • Skim through and weed out repeat information
  • In-line Citations where necessary
  • References according to Layout Style Guide
  • Reformat to follow Manual of Style
  • why is the letter from the aaup president pasted in there?- also if it needs to be included can we format it better? Separate the quote?
  • Better format background section for consistency
  • Get rid of all bullet pointed material/notes
  • Does the letter from the aaup president have paragraphs or is it one solid block?
  • Communicate between the background and events groups to ensure that no information is repeated or left out
  • For group 3 start with your second section since it mentions Mecklin and flows better with Group 2's part, rather than starting with aaup president letter