Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 17)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by BethNaught was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved. BethNaught (talk) 16:40, 17 January 2015 (UTC)Reply