User talk:Solcsydney/sandbox

From Dr. Cohen: You are the first person to ask about the homelessness topic so that would be my preference. Remember you are adding to the article, not the talk page. See what literature you can find. That will help you to know where to add to the content.

Peer Review

Your additions look great. They flow with the article really well as a whole and the information is relevant. My only suggestion is to watch the use of the word "many", or the phrase "many believe", in the research section. Try saying "Researches have found" or something along those lines, as not to be suggestive about what "most" people believe. Great job overall! — Preceding unsigned comment added by JordanTaylor96 (talk • contribs) 01:03, 7 March 2018 (UTC)