User talk:Shahid.o/sandbox

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Lynch.or

Peer Review by Orna Lynch

  • Expansion of a previously very limited article on EF-G (Elongation Factor G)
  • Author expanded the introduction, and added sections differentiating the function of this particular protein, expanding into the uses of protein termination and elongation.
  • The sections added are very comprehensive and distinct enough that they do not duplicate any other sections or repeat information
  • The new information is organized in a very logical fashion, major improvement on the previous stub article
  • Sources include a large variety of scientific databases with links to the direct page referencing EF-G
  • Links to related articles relevant and helpful for understanding the concepts presented- even for those who may not have an extensive knowledge of protein function
  • A possible improvement would be perhaps using numbered references throughout the article instead of names- could reduce the amount of content in each section and prevent the references from getting lost in the information

Lynch.or (talk) 16:12, 5 April 2018 (UTC) Orna LynchReply