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Heather's Peer Review

Hi Sfazli2018,

Here are a few suggestions I found while reviewing the article you are editing, "Galapagos Sea Lion". The lead section contains good information, but could focus a little more on the main points of the article. The taxonomy section could use a more detailed analysis, possibly including their divergence patterns. The article has a lot of information, but doesn't seem to have a lot of references and fact checking, so anything you add would be improvement! The section on behavior includes some information about human interaction, specifically pertaining to the galapagos sea lion's vulnerability; this may fit better under the "Threats and Status" section.

Just some things to think about while working on your article, Goodluck! -Heather Molander

Thank you Heather, I took your advice and added most of my content towards the Threats and Status section. Sfazli2018 (talk) 22:09, 16 April 2018 (UTC)Sara Fazli