User talk:Seanp7477/sandbox

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For the uses section of the article it may be worth changing it to domestication, or a similar word, as the word uses sounds somewhat misleading.Aside from that so far the information presented seems non-biased and covers the topic in a manner that is easy to understand.Thomp3aj (talk) 16:48, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review Feedback from Rebecca to Sean

In the lead section, I would recommend refraining from using words like "likely". This makes the source seem uncertain. Also in the last paragraph of the lead section, you use "are known for being" twice in a row. It would probably be best to switch one of these. I would maybe add more to the pet section, as the industrial section is far longer, and possibly change the title to domesticated, although it isn't necessary. I think you could possibly elaborate a little more in the industrial section as well. Overall, I think you have covered the topic to a good extent and made sure to find reliable sources to back up your information. You also remained fairly neutral on the chicken stance and provided backing for both sides. In addition, I think your Lead section describes the basics of the topic as necessary in an orderly and concise format. Becca roo32 (talk) 16:51, 11 March 2019 (UTC)