User talk:ScrumbulusSour/Janiva Ellis
Finished the peer review
editScrumbulusSour, I have finished writing my peer review for your sandbox; here is a link.
User:ScrumbulusSour/Janiva Ellis/20BrokenCupcakez Peer Review
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ScrumbulusSour/Janiva_Ellis/20BrokenCupcakez_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review 20BrokenCupcakez (talk) 15:41, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
Peer Review: In the early life and education section, you wrote, "Ellis came back to New York in 2017 with a new outlook on her upbringing, and she does this through her latest work," what work are you referring to?
In selected exhibitions, you added two exhibitions; make sure to put them in chronological order. And those two exhibitions you italicized, are you going to do that to the other ones as well?
Information from your bibliography that you did not include in your sandbox: A 2020 exhibition- Editors' Picks: 19 Things Not to Miss in New York's Art World This Week
"Wikipedia states Ellis occasionally paints religious symbols and leaves it at that. However, I would like to conclude late Gothic and Renaissance art mashed with current-day modernist art to describe her style." - Hammer Projects: Janiva Ellis | Hammer Museum If you are going to conclude that her art is late Gothic and Renaissance with current modern art you need sources that prove it. An example of this is Ellis's “Hammer Projets: The Angels” (2022).
"From here, I want to add something about the Whitney Biennial and how it was "The 79th edition presents a roster of 75 artists that veers disproportionately young, showcasing predominantly artists of color who have never exhibited at the museum before,"(Anon n.d.)" - ‘We Were Seeing and Feeling Anxiety’: The Whitney Biennial Curators on How Artists’ Struggle With Debt and Real Estate Shaped the 2019 Show.
Other sections you can add (if you can find the sources):
- Interviews
- Reviews and Mentions
- Publications
- Collaborations
You are not required to include these; I am only suggesting them. These sections are also from my article. 20BrokenCupcakez (talk) 02:33, 29 October 2023 (UTC)