User talk:Schwab.112/sandbox

Instructor Comments No. 2

Well-written

• Good work on this aspect - focus on the Short North Page in this regard.

Verifiable with no original research

• Needs a few more sources and citations.

Broad in its coverage

• Appropriately broad

Neutral

• You do a good job balancing.

Stable

• No Comments.

Illustrated

• Try to insert an InfoBox, and use the Image of Goodale Park in the InfoBox (Its HUGE, and distracting)
• You need to go back and make sure the formatting is better on the images.

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 15:33, 9 December 2014 (UTC)

Overall I think your groups wiki page looks great! I really enjoyed the history description in particular, It gives a great background of how Victorian Village came to be what it is today.I also enjoyed reading your structure and landmarks section as it brings attention to noteworthy places with a cool history behind them. Your pictures look great but I would suggest adding maybe one more to fill in a completely text filled section around structures and landmarks. It does appear that one of your picture links is broken or not displaying correctly in the geography section. Maybe just fixing your broken link will fix that text filled area though. I would also suggest adding a few more references to areas in your transportation and dining and night life sections. One last suggestion I have would to be add more description and details to your introduction. Other than those small things though I really think our page is great!