Your lead paragraph is a great start but can be slightly longer and could be expanded on for when you create your final page. You should link the Crimean Tatars wikipedia page to your where you mention the that language in the paragraph so others can easily refer to it if they need more history or clarification. You could expand on the Hebrew Script part and give a bit of a timeline from when that changed. When creating your final page giving a more detailed history of the language and how many people still speak it and where exactly they reside.
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