User talk:Sam ERTH/Pulpwood
Latest comment: 8 months ago by Millie Deroy
Hello!
I made a peer review for your article, but I just wanted to say that I think your lead is very good and a great addition to your article. (Much better than what is was). Perhaps try breaking it down into even smaller sections and then expanding more in the body of your article.? Overall, Great job. I loved reading it.