User talk:Sabreeze15/sandbox/The Meeting of Leo the Great and Attila
A lead section that is easy to understand: The lead was very easy to read that covered a good amount of context about the image. It was a good balance of focus for someone like me who doesn't know anything about its history.
A clear structure: This part seemed strong and had good amounts of information that helped create a balanced structure to the over all page. The sections were great and easy to follow as a overall chronical lining of what happen.
Balanced coverage: Had a great coverage of what historians think, but what also science has showed us about the people and what happen to them during that time. The interpretation was good.
Neutral content: It seems very neutral and some of the phrases you use seem like you are taking a side, but then it says something neutral.
Reliable sources: Look good and had no issues opening them up.
- The only thing I see is some of the phrasing seems off or rather some of the words like "So" and ect.
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