User talk:Sa3730a/sandbox
Great Job! I believed you emphasized a lot in the crime part of the article but that is not a problem. You found many interesting things about the crime of the city that the article didn't mention also I liked that you said about the museum that opened in honor of the children who lost their parents during the violent years. I found very important that you said about how the crime was reduced from 2010 to 2014. I believe that a good idea will be if you added a picture that showed how homicides were decreased. But overall I think that you added very specific information that was needed for the article to be better! Myrtokro (talk) 17:54, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
Thank you
editThank you so much for your feedback. I am glad that you were able to understand what I wanted to do with this article. Sa3730a (talk) 20:26, 24 October 2016 (UTC)