User talk:SBaylor/sandbox
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Mjensen32 in topic Article Content Draft Peer Review by Maria Jensen
Will M's Peer Review
edit- I think that your added lead section is a good overview and roadmap of your article. This follows Wikipedia's criteria well.
- Does this lead section follow the sections in your article? Are they in order?
- Do you need any new sources? The lead section is just an overview so maybe not. Any other areas in the article?
- I think a good portion of your work will be editing the structure of the article. You did a nice job of this above!
Article Content Draft Peer Review by Maria Jensen
edit-I am not sure if this is necessary for the lead section, but I would add a reference to each sentence.
-Great job with adding to the lead section while keeping it concise and short.
-Wikipedia suggests that the lead section contain no more than 4 paragraphs, but I believe what you have written is perfectly fine. However, if you would like to add more content that is within Wikipedia's lead section guidelines, that is fine, too.