User talk:Rosenam2/Indigenous peoples of Costa Rica

Peer Review

(To premise this, I would like to say that I do not know how to type accents with my computer so please excuse the incorrect spelling of any tribes)

I think that article all in all is well on its way. I just have a few comments which I'll try to summarize in sections, I hope it is helpful:

Grammar/Sentence Structure

There is a sentence/grammar error in the first sentence of the Guaymi subsection

The last sentence in the Terraba subsection needs to be looked at

There are some errors throughout the education subsection

There is a run on sentence in the Healthcare subsection

General comments

I think it would look nicer and be better information-wise if the "groups" subsections were around the same size. It may be better to reorganize by region but I don't know if that is the best way to communicate what needs to be communicated.

There are no citations in the group section, so watch out for that. There is also no citation for the first paragraph of the "Land" Subsection (and I'm pretty sure it has a lot of statistics so that is important).

In the "Healthcare" subsection, there is some confusion with the abbreviation and the actual name of the organization, I don't know if that is a translational thing or an error, just a heads up.

The Cabecar people seem interesting and as a reader it would be nice to have more information on them since they are so different from the other tribes.

There are a few places where I made minor edits to spelling or grammar as I read through the article. DivineIrakiza (talk) 01:01, 5 November 2023 (UTC)