User talk:RonBurgundyStayClassySanDiego/sandbox

Sources

Your second citation is a link that doesn't provide correct information about the source such as its title. Also, you need to quote specific portions from your sources that you'll be using to support the information in the WP article. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:25, 21 February 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing the citations. You still need to add quotations from your sources to the sandbox. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:56, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

The Lead

Your lead explains what the article is about rather than giving a summary of the most important events mentioned in the article, but it works for this kind of article. Go ahead and post it. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:27, 28 February 2016 (UTC)