User talk:Rolandogzz/sandbox

Hi Rolando, I think this is off to a good start. Make sure that the tone throughout is neutral and that for any fact or piece of information you incorporate, that you include a source reference. It is also helpful to link out to other existing Wikipedia articles. I wonder if you could add a section on "Impacts of G-jitter"? Though you cover some of that in the existing sections, it might be useful to have a bit more information in this area. Are there any other sections you could add to expand content? Also, the section title "Accounting for G-jitter" is a bit confusing--maybe renaming it to "Preventing G-jitter" or something similar might be more descriptive of its content? Do you have any images that you could also include? Those would further enhance your article. Otherwise, I think this is ready to move to mainspace and then you could request a review by another Wikipedia editor on the Teahouse: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Teahouse --Amyc29 (talk) 12:02, 14 November 2017 (UTC)