User talk:Revenedit/sandbox/Truth Unveiled by Time (Bernini)

Peer Review by Alena Romero

Hi James,

From looking at the original article, I believe the lead was the only bit of information you had to start. It seems strong, but there were some inconsistencies the previous author made. I mostly saw this when they would refer to Time and Truth because sometimes they would be italicized and other times not. Your structure seems strong at the moment, and I like how you included a section on the objects provenance. Maybe you could add more information to the visual analysis and influences sections. I think you had a good distribution of sources throughout, but you could possibly add more links to people such as Bernini's biographer. Overall, your tone stayed fairly neutral and your sources seem reliable. I wonder if you could bring some of the descriptions of Truth and Time from the lead down into the visual analysis section. If not, maybe you could expand on it more there as well.

Good job so far! Romeroalena2 (talk) 17:05, 5 April 2023 (UTC)