User talk:Rcnewman/Evens

Latest comment: 7 months ago by JustAJar4 in topic Peer Review

Peer Review

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Hi there! I apologize for this being late, but I finished peer reviewing your article. You can find it here.

The tl;dr of what I put is that I think it is a pretty good start to the article, but you can flesh out some of the details you have added (potentially by creating sub-sections) and create citation hyper-links within your additions. Since I am not sure if you are adding more major sections to the article, I did not have much of a comment on that aspect. I thought the sources you included were solid as well, and also provided a couple more places to look. I hope my input was helpful! JustAJar4 (talk) 05:57, 7 November 2023 (UTC)Reply