User talk:Raegannicoleee/NO Historic Voodoo Museum

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You have some good, random detail throughout here, but right now it's just a jumble of different facts. You need to organize your thoughts. Slow down and say more than the bare minimum about each of those thoughts. And you need to cite those facts. These are not your own ideas and they are not a part of the common knowledge. There's some good potential here, but it's all been quickly dumped on the page.

JT: (talk) 19:12, 10 March 2021 (UTC)