1. I think that you have made good changes to your stub so far, and the paragraphs you have added seem to mostly meet the standards for a neutral point of view Alhtough, some of the descriptive words you use to describe this stub, comes off a bit opinionated, therefore you maybe you should use less descriptive words and keep it monotone. 2.The sources you have used for your stub seem to meet Wikipedia's standards, based off the citations you have included within the information you found. Your sources seem to be reliable as well , therefore I think your stub's sources do meet the standards.
Start a discussion about improving the User:Raakingbemi/sandbox page
Talk pages are where people discuss how to make content on Wikipedia the best that it can be. You can use this page to start a discussion with others about how to improve the "User:Raakingbemi/sandbox" page.
